From royon@hep.saclay.cea.fr Tue Jan 14 09:25:22 2014 Date: Tue, 14 Jan 2014 09:25:22 +0100 (CET) From: ROYON Christophe SPP To: Christophe ROYON Subject: Re: plan for yellow report (fwd) ---------- Forwarded message ---------- Date: Mon, 13 Jan 2014 22:15:38 +0100 From: Kenneth Österberg To: valentina avati Cc: ROYON Christophe SPP , nicolo cartiglia Subject: Re: plan for yellow report Dear Christophe and Nicolo, I agree with all Valentina's comments. Especially the introductory physics motivations for each chapter and the triggering aspects (now only mentioned in summary) are missing. Concerning chapter 5, I believe breaking up the low and medium lumi sections into two parts: one focusing on rap gap based measurements and one on (two) proton based measurements, would improve the readability. Then also the discussion of the benefit of proton tags would have a natural place, in the begining of the part of proton based measurements. High lumi central exclusive is by default with proton tags. And please remove "Exploratory physics" from the title of the high lumi central exclusive. There are other "exploratory physics" channels that are not high lumi. cheers Ken Lainaus valentina avati : > Hi Christophe & Nicolo', > here some comments on the contents of the yellow report. > I hope it can be useful for the discussion tomorrow. > > Ciao, Vale > > > > On 12/12/2013 09:54 AM, ROYON Christophe SPP wrote: >> Dear convener, >> >> We are happy to send you the first draft of the plan for the yellow report >> as we discussed during the last meeting in Cracow. Please let us know if any >> suggestions/comments/changes concerning the structure, contents... They are >> very much welcome. It would be nice if the comments could be sent in a week >> by Friday December 20 before the Christmas holidays. >> >> We also put some names of people who could be in charge of writing each >> section and also the coordinators for each chapter (they will be responsible >> for contacting the different contributors and collecting their different >> contributions). Additional volunteers are of course welcome! >> >> In addition, we would like to remind you that our next meeting will take >> place at CERN on January 14 and 15. Please send us suggestions for the >> different contributions. If possible, it would be nice if the contributions >> are now directly related to the yellow report write up. >> >> Thanks >> Cheers >> >> Nicolo >> Christophe