Very nice presentation!  I have just a few minor comments:
S4/5: it is not clear what these plots are.  If it's worth including these plots, it's worth explaining them.  At a bare minimum, the axes should be labelled.
S5: I would make the period in the last bullet red so it isn't overlooked
S7-9: axis labels are not readable

General comments:
-You should check with the relevant conveners to make sure it is okay to show your WIP plots (particularly those with data)

Regards,
John

Nice presentation, just a few minor comments: 

Slide 4: The red text on red backround is not readable, moreover there are no axis labels 
Slide 5: Also no Axis labels! 

And plots containing only simulated data should be labelled as "Atlas Simulation" 

- Walter

Thank you for the comments. I have gone in and made the changes. 

Regards,

Calvin