Overall nice talk. You stayed within the time limit. Please save the video in mp4 format

For all slides: Add slide numbers. Remove semicolons (;) after each bullet point. Keep the same space formatting between the bullet points

Elaborate little on the motivation

Slide1: add fb^-1 after integrated luminosity 3000. Keep the same space formatting between the bullet points

Slide 5: Increase the size of the pictures, it is difficult to read the text.

General comment: do not read the text on the slides. 

Good Luck!

Vallary