<p>Very nice presentation!&nbsp;&nbsp;I have just a few minor comments:<br>
s3/4/13: you went very quickly over the last plot on each slide. &nbsp;Too fast for me to comprehend. &nbsp;If it is worth showing the audience these plots, it is worth giving them time to digest. &nbsp;What is the takeaway from these plots?<br>
s8: there is a lot of text here. &nbsp;Can this be reduced somehow?</p>

<p>Regards,<br>
John</p>

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<p>Nice presentation, just one&nbsp;minor comments:&nbsp;</p>

<p>The "two solutions" mentionned on slide 12 only explained in the backups slides. At least point to the backup slide.&nbsp;</p>

<p>- Walter</p>