Very nice presentation!  I have just a few minor comments:
-S5/6: what selection is applied here? (Egor: added)
-backup: plots should also have WIP label (Egor: fixed)

General comments:
-Units should not be italicized (Egor: fixed)
-You should check with the relevant conveners to make sure it is okay to show your WIP plots (particularly those with data) (Egor: waiting for feedback from the conveners; in principle, sharing the plots at APS don't violate the ATLAS rules)

Regards,
John

Nice presentation, just a few  minor comments: 

I think short text (bullet) on slide 5 and 6 would be useful to explain the plots (as you do orally).  (Egor: added)
The plots in the backup slides are labelled  "ATLAS Internal"!   (Egor: fixed)

- Walter


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Egor:

Many thanks for the review and comments!
Uploaded the updated slides in PDF and the video (both here and in the review agenda)