<p>This was a very nice presentation.&nbsp; You stayed within time and did not have to rush.&nbsp; I do have a few suggestions for you, but not many.</p>

<p>Slide 3: I think you can spend a bit more time talking about the figure shown here (don't call it a plot!).&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>

<p>Slide 4: Between slides 3 and 4, you need to define the sTGC acronym.&nbsp; Folks outside ATLAS will not know what this is.</p>

<p>Slide 7: Try to avoid parentheses within parentheses.&nbsp; I think the outer ones aren't needed.&nbsp; Spelling check on signal.</p>

<p>Slide 8: You should define what pi-network is if you want people to follow your argument.</p>

<p>Slide 11: There's a lot going on in these figures and you don't discuss them much.&nbsp; If you don't need to discuss all of the figure details, it's better to not show all of them.&nbsp; This would give you time to talk about what's happening in each figure.</p>

<p>Slides 12/13: I think you're using scintillator triggers for this.&nbsp; If so, you should just state it.&nbsp; If not, then I missed something.</p>

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<p>Best regards,</p>

<p>Wade</p>

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