Miha

The poster looks great and it was very interesting to see. I'm not an expert on this topic, so I got a bit confused in a few parts. Please see the comments below which might help with the clarity a bit.

Some of the plots were also a bit difficult to read, so it might be a good idea to zoom-in in each pannel when you are presenting.

The ATLAS detector and BIS78 project
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It was hard for me to keep track of which parts already got replaced and which parts will be replaced in LS3. It might help to state how many BIS stations there are in total? If I understand correctly, so far we only replaced one half of one BIS station?

Benefit from the phase-2 upgrade
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The word 'BIBO' was not defined. Suggest to either define it or avoid using it. It might be enough to just explain to the audience that they should compare the red histogram to the sum of the red, blue, and green in the plot.

 
Surface commissioning of BIS78 tRPC
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A few phrases are not quite clear in this section and it would be good to rephrase or explain them.

"(η OR φ) efficiency"
-> What do the eta / phi refer to here?

"singlet efficiency"
-> What is is a singlet?

 
Commissioning of BIS78 sMDT
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"Good inclined track passing through several mezzanines"
-> What makes it "good"? What is the picture telling us?

Not clear what the two different curves on the middle left plot are.

Why is there no data for "Module 0" in the middle right plot? What is "Module 0"?