Overall slides were good but in the video, it was very difficult to hear the audio clearly. The quality of the audio sound needs to be improved. While recording, speak close to the mic very clearly. Also, use mp4 format to save the video.

The talk ran over the time by almost 3 mins. It needs to be under 12 minutes. Practicing more times can help you gather your thoughts while explaining the slides.

Slide1: spent almost 1:30 mins. The timing can be reduced slightly

Slide 5: spent more time on this slide and can be reduced by 15-20s.

Slide 6: It will be easy to understand if you point the cursor towards the components you are talking about while showing the probe station setup. Also it will help if you label components in the picture

Slide 13: X-Y axis and labels of the plots need higher font size for easy reading

Good Luck!

Vallary