Very nice presentation!  I have just a few minor comments:
s2: for a short talk like this, IMO a table of contents is not necessary
s3: your video somewhat obscures the slide
S8: there is a lot of text here.  Can it be summarized symbolically?
S10: I would not call pT(Z) good agreement

General comments:
-You should check with the relevant conveners to make sure it is okay to show your WIP plots (particularly those with data)
-Several plots are labelled "work in progress" without an "ATLAS" label.  Are these ATLAS plots?  If so, they need the ATLAS label.

Regards,
John
 

Nice presentation, just one minor comment: 

The second bullet of the Summary slide (13)  is a bit  awkward. How about "We are working  the see the Radiation Amplitude Zero effect in the data." 

- Walter