Very nice presentation! I have just a few minor comments:
S2: you are too pessimistic. The goal should not be to set a limit, but instead to discover new physics. If you don't discover new physics, then setting a limit on new physics is the fallback
S4: you define little h and big H, but not the pseudoscalar A
s5: what is "statistical yield"?
s28: you are missing WIP label on plots
General comments:
-You should check with the relevant conveners to make sure it is okay to show your WIP plots (particularly those with data)
-You talked a bit fast in order to finish in time. It would be better to remove some content and take your time
Regards,
John