<p>Very nice presentation!&nbsp;&nbsp;I have just a few minor comments:<br>
s2: for a short talk like this, IMO a table of contents is not necessary<br>
S3: it would be nice to make the plot larger<br>
s6: why isn't the BDT significantly better than the track multiplicity based tagger?<br>
S9: I wasn't able to follow your explanation. &nbsp;Can you clarify this? &nbsp;I also can't read the plot labels<br>
s12: "Uncertainties" would be a better title, since you list stat uncertainty</p>

<p>General comments:<br>
-You should check with the relevant conveners to make sure it is okay to show your WIP plots (particularly those with data)</p>

<p>Regards,<br>
John</p>

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<p>Nice presentation, just one minor comment:&nbsp;</p>

<p>On slide 3, the text and the plot overlap a bit. I would&nbsp;make the text smaller.&nbsp;</p>

<p>- Walter&nbsp;</p>

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