Hsu:

Congratulations for this very nice draft. I have some minor suggestions to your slide.

p1. Just show speakers' name on behalf of the ATLAS

p3/p4. I would suggest to move this to backup slide. You can really just focus on the gamma gamma +HF analysis

I didn't suggest to add slides but some nature questions from the audiences will be what the pT spectrum of the detector, what the selection of the jets, what the b-tagging algorithms, and what the pT/eta dependence of the b-tagging, how will those dependence affect your measurements.  Just keep these in mind and prepare some answers in case those questions show up.

I am very excited to see your future progress of this important measurements, in particular, in the future version of the APS.