Very nice presentation!  I have just a few minor comments:
S10: can you add a plot or two of the most important variables?

General comments:
-All ATLAS plots should have "ATLAS" label.  If the plot is internal, it should additionally have "Work in Progress" label.

Regards,
John

 

Nice presentation, just a few minor comments: 

Slide 9, last bullet 
"Continuos b jet aceptance feed into BDT in the future" sounds a bit strange to me. How about:  "Plan to feed Continuos b jet aceptanceinto BDT"

Slide 11, top right plot (signal/background) has no axis labels. I assume the plots on this slide are yours (un-approved)? Please add "ATLAS work in progress". 

- Walter