This is a very nice presentation, so I will not have many suggestions for you.  You spoke at a good pace, though I think you were a bit hurried on the last slide.  I think practicing a few times should allow you to find exactly what you want to say on each slide so you can finish without hurrying.

Slide 3: you will say "BIS" many times in this talk, so you may want to also define that acronym.

Slide 5: you have bracketed numbers, which I think must be the tolerance goals, but you don't say anything about them.  And if these are tolerances, it's interesting that the dark current tolerance is bound at 0 nA but the data are frequently below zero.

Slide 6: practice how you'll walk through the pictures.  It was confusing which picture was left bottom and left middle, etc.

Slide 8: These plots are too small to read.  If you don't plan on going into the details, perhaps it's better to show one set of figures but larger.

Slide 11: I couldn't figure out where to see the grounding foils.  Also, with the y-axis label on the plot removed, it's hard to know what you're showing us.

Slide 14: Kevin Nelson's talk lists 15 chambers built at UM, while you say 18.  You two should be consistent.

Please feel free to email me at fisherw@msu.edu if you have questions about these comments.

Best regards,

Wade