<p><strong>Hsu:</strong></p>

<p>Congratulations to nice slide. I just have a few comments:</p>

<p>p1 Add home institute in addition to LOGO&nbsp;:)</p>

<p>p3 Is the BR containing the leptonic decay branching ratio from W and Z boson?<br>
&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;It's nice to clarify.</p>

<p>p4. It's nice to explicitly say that 3 and only 3 leptons</p>

<p>p5/p6 these two can be moved to backup slide</p>

<p>p9. I would add slides to explain definition of CR and difference from SR</p>

<p>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; At least, explanations about how most dominant bkg is controlled.</p>

<p>p10. can be moved to backup slide. With such a short time, you can save this as technical details in the backup slide.</p>

<p>p11. Use a few cartoons to explain the definition of observables will be useful</p>

<p>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; The novelty&nbsp;of this analysis is BDT part, is this after all Signal Region selection, or another Loose pre-selection ? It's good to describe strategy of this analysis in the very beginning of the talk.</p>

<p>p14. It's nice to comment on the expected timeline of this analysis.<br>
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