- S3:
+ left plot suggest to stop x-axis before the statistical noise
+ in caption "colliding bunches" vs "RHU colliding bins" -> clarify
+ clarify how the "exponential fit" works
- S5:
+ in caption (a), (b), ... should be placed at beginning of the sentence. Use (left) , (right) instead.
- S7:
+ use second/right y-axis for derivative curve
-S8:
+ change title of slide, eg. "... Baseline Noise"
+ in caption it should be clarified there is no signal in these plots, eg. remove the word signal in caption
- S9:
+ agreed to remove the fit and point out the nMIP points on the plot
+ error bars on the distribution look too large (compared to the stat variations), suggest to remove them
- S10:
+ in caption note that some residual collision products are observed when collisions start
+ why it the background becomes noisy at flat top?
- S11:
+ slide is too crowded, should split in two or more
+ in caption state about spread in channels (~50%)
+ can remove "NC SG" on the plots
- S12:
+ split into 2 slides to have more space for caption explanation
- S13:
+ change colors that are not visible
- S14:
+ clarify what background correction is applied
+ clarify its all bcids , including train bcid's
- S16:
+agree to remove slide